Question

书面表达（满分25分）

假如你是李华，在上一周去英国参加了由Fiona的学校组织的两校学生交流活动，在英国期间，你居住在Fiona的家中。回国后，请你给Fiona写封感谢信，内容包括：

1. 交流活动中的收获和感受

2. 回忆在Fiona家度过的美好日子

3. 感谢她送你的英文图书

注意：1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）

提示词汇：文化交流活动：Cultural Exchange activity

Dear Fiona,

I’ve been back home safely from England.

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Yours,

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Fiona,

I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in England.

Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange activity. I enjoyed myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends.

What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we spent together.

Here I especially thank you for the book you offered me as a gift. It’s a great help for me to learn about your country. I will treasure and make full use of it.

Welcome to China when it’s convenient for your!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语stay in 呆在某处；participated in参加；have a better understanding of对。。有更好的理解；What’s more而且；make full use of充分利用；We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history.这个句子which代指上面这件事，引导非限制性定语从句；And I’ll never forget the days we spent together这个句子中we spent together做the days的定语从句；It’s a great help for me to learn about your country这个句子it 做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；

考点： 提纲类作文