Question

科学技术在日新月异地发展，它们在人们生活中的应用越来越广泛，但是也带来了一些问题。结合下面的图画，谈谈科学技术给人们造成的影响。

注意：

1．词数：100—120词左右。

2．开头已为你写好，不计入词数。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

From the above pictures, we can see the following scene.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Form the above pictures, we can see the following scene: in the past when father came back from work and stepped into the house, his wife would bring him a cup of hot coffee and his little son used to happily greet him with “Daddy”, and his daughter would throw away her book to welcome him, which made him glad and also “Hi” to them happily.

But now when father gets home, he finds that his son is addicted to playing computer games and his daughter is busy phoning her friends and his wife is absorbed in watching TV series. Everyone is doing something and cares nothing about his return. The father doesn’t become angry because he is also dealing with his business with a cell phone.

What the pictures reflect is that the wide use of technology is beginning to influence the relationship between family members, who seem to have no time communicating with each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，谈论的是科技对生活的影响，可以从科技快速发展之前的情况和之后的情况差异进行分析。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

考点：考查看图作文写作

点评：看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容。