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13．科技的发展使得通讯方式也越来越方便快捷；几乎每个高中生都有了自己的QQ，可以用QQ和自己的朋友聊天，向老师问问题，交流思想．但有的同学花太多的时间在QQ上，有的QQ好友甚至有几百人之多，请你就以上现象加以分析，并发表自己的看法．
注意：词数120～150词．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇议论文．文章给出了简单的汉语提示，给学生较大的自由发挥的空间，有利于学生能力水平的体现．根据所给提示信息，针对这一现象发表看法，以此为话题进行思维和联想，自由发挥发表自己的看法，又属于提纲作文．
在写作时以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：（1）QQ的好处 （2）QQ的坏处（3）自己的看法
重要短语：with the development of…（随着…的发展），communicate with…（与…交流），chat with…（与…聊天），solve one's puzzles（解决疑难），exchanage one's thoughts（交流思想），spend time doing（花费时间做某事），use up（用完，用光），bring sb much convenience（给某人带来便捷），limit one's time on sth （在…限制时间），devote oneself to one's study（全身心投入学习）．
【高分句型一】
1．Almost every Senior student has their own QQ number，with which they can chat with their friends，ask their teachers to help them solve their puzzles and exchanage their thoughts．
此处是由"介词+关系代词"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"Almost every Senior student has their own QQ number"，关系代词"which"指代前面主句中的"QQ number"．
【高分句型二】
2．However，some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends，some of whom are totally strangers．
此处是由"代词+of+whom"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends"，关系代词"whom"指代前面主句中的"QQ friends"．
【高分句型三】
3．What's worse，some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ，using up almost all their spare time，even in the classroom．
此处是由现在分词短语+宾语"using up almost all their spare time"作伴随状语，主句为"some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ"，主句为"some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ"，主句的主语"some students"与动词"use up"构成逻辑上的主动关系．
【高分句型四】
4．I ③do think that QQ can bring us much convenience and benefit when communicating with others，①but ②what we should do is use it properly and reasonably．
   ①此处是由连词"but"引导的并列句，与前面的句子为转折关系．
  ②此处是由疑问代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在从句中作动词"do"的宾语，由于主语从句中含有动词"do"，因此表语从句中省略了"to"，即为"what we should do is to use it properly and reasonably"．
  ③此处为"do/did/does+V-原形"表强调，"do think"意为"确实/的确认为"；连词"that"后为宾语从句．

解答 With the development of science and technology，the way of communication has became increasingly diverse and convenient．People can communicate with their friends or relatively freely in different ways．Among them chatting on the QQ is one of the most popular ones．Almost every Senior student has their own QQ number，with which they can chat with their friends，ask their teachers to help them solve their puzzles and exchanage their thoughts．【高分句型一】QQ is really a helpful tool to them．（QQ的好处）
     However，some students have spent too much time chatting with their QQ friends，some of whom are totally strangers．【高分句型二】Most of the chatting on the QQ is completely meaningless．What's worse，some students have hundreds of QQ friends on the QQ，using up almost all their spare time，even in the classroom．【高分句型三】（QQ的坏处）
      I do think that QQ can bring us much convenience and benefit when communicating with others，but what we should do is use it properly and reasonably．【高分句型四】
We should limit our time on it and devote ourselves to our study．（自己的看法）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．