Question

随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车，你班同学就此展开了一次讨论，提出两种不同的观点和看法。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信，客观介绍这两种看法。
赞同者认为：1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具；2.反映出国民生活条件提高，国家富强；3.带动其他行业发展。
反对者认为：1.废气污染严重；2.过多规则影响交通，导致更多事故；3.停车问题日益突出。
注意：1.信的开头已为你写好；2.词数：120左右；
3.参考词汇：方便的 convenient；交通 transportation
Dear editor，
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.
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Yours truly
Li Hue

Answer 1

Dear editor，
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars.
With the development of people’s living conditions，more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it good to own a car. Firstly，it’s a convenient，fast and comfortable means of transportation tool. You can go to a lot of places at any time. Secondly，it shows that people are becoming richer，and the country stronger. It also makes businesses and industries develop faster. Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents. Besides，parking cars is another big problem. Maybe people should think carefully before they buy a car.
Yours truly，
Li Hua

试题分析：本篇写作题材是对于越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。
点评：考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。