Question

2．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
描写一件你珍藏的物品．文章要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：句型一：①The reason why I still keep it in my memory is ②that it reminds me of an old saying：there must be a use for one's talent．The reason why…是以reason为先行词，关系副词why引导的定语从句．在that引导的表语从句中含有短语remind sb．of sth．使某人想起某物．句型二：①When I was ten years old，there was an old man ②living in my neighborhood．when引导时间状语从句，在从句中作状语．living是现在分词作后置定语，与其逻辑主语man是主动关系．

解答 In my drawer，there is a deliberate wooden toy horse．（开门见山，指出珍藏的物品）It was a gift from an old man in my neighborhood when I was still veryyoung．The reason why I still keep it in my memory is that it reminds me of anold saying：there must be a use for one's talent．【高分句型一】When I was ten years old，therewas an old man living in my neighborhood．【高分句型一】He didn't have theopportunity to study in school，but he learned how to make wood furniture．Everytime people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture，he waswilling to help them．To my surprise，in his spare time，he would make some toys with small piece s of wood．Some ofthem were sold to the toy store and others were given to us．（具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品）The moment I see the lovely toy horse made by this old man，I wouldremember the happy childhood．The old man impressed me deeply with his talent andkindness．From the little horse toy，we can see whatever kind of talent you have，you canfind your own method to display your talent and bring love to others．（这件物品为什么珍藏到现在的原因）

点评 本文要求描写一件你珍藏的物品，要具体说明何时、何地、怎样得到这件物品以及为什么珍藏到现在．所以在写作时必须审好题，不能遗漏任何一条．在准确表述内容的基础上，争取多用些从句，非谓语和短语使文章生动，上档次．