Question

3月5日是学雷锋日。某英文报社为此举办一次征文比赛。请根据如下新闻报道及内容要点提示写一篇英文短文应征。

新闻报道

3月5日当天，不少志愿者“扎堆”到养老院献爱心，以至于老人们被迫过度“享受”而倍感疲惫，令人尴尬不已。    

内容要点：

1.简要描述新闻报道；

2.分析现象产生的可能原因；

3.个人看法。

注意：

1可根据内容要点进行适当发挥；

2.词数120左右;

3.开头己给出，不计入总词数；

4.参考词汇：雷锋精神Lei Feng Spirit,养老院nursing      home。

Recently, an issue has come into public attention.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Recently, an issue has come into public attention. As is reported in the newspaper, many volunteers rushed into nursing homes to help the elderly, which turned out to be more of a burden. Some senior citizens complained that they were badly exhausted by excessive voluntary service on such a single day.

From my point of view, there must be two reasons contributing to this phenomenon. In the first place, many volunteers flooded into nursing homes either in the true charitable spirit, i.e, Lei Feng spirit or at the request of their boss. Secondly, they must have gone for the nursing homes in the city-centre within easy reach.

The above embarrassing happening conveys to us that Lei Feng spirit is nothing but a routine way of action and calls for us to do a favor for the needy around us in a practical way.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲作文：就现在人们“扎堆”到养老院献爱心，以至于老人们被迫过度“享受”而倍感疲惫的事情，对这件事情分析原因和说明个人的观点，首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是提纲作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。也要用一些适当的关联词。

【亮点说明】As is reported in the newspaper, many volunteers rushed into nursing homes to help the elderly, which turned out to be more of a burden.这句话有两个定语从句， Some senior citizens complained that they were badly exhausted by excessive voluntary service on such a single day.这句话用额宾语从句， From my point of view, there must be two reasons contributing to this phenomenon. 这句话是现在分词做定语， The above embarrassing happening conveys to us that Lei Feng spirit is nothing but a routine way of action and calls for us to do a favor for the needy around us in a practical way.这句话用了convey这样的高级词汇和短语nothing but，还有文章还使用了 In the first place, . Secondly,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查提纲类短文