Question

【题目】假定你是李华，即将高中毕业，想申请就读一所国外大学。请你写一封信向该校的负责人咨询以下信息：

1.就读该大学的资历和要求。

2.就读该大学的费用和住宿条件。

注意：

1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a Chinese student who will graduate from a high school.

__________________________________________________________________________

Look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm a student who will graduate from a high school. Having known about your university online. I'm writing to inquire about some information as follows:

To start with, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I've learnt English for 10 years and I can speak English fluently, but I wonder if there are any further requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting. I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation?

I would appreciate it if you would be kind enough to provide me with the relevant information above. Look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是即将毕业的高中学生，写信给一所国外的大学负责人，咨询，1．就读该大学的资历和要求。2. 就读该大学的费用和住宿条件。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：包含定语从句的句子I'm a student who will graduate from a high school.；现在分词的完成式做状语Having known about your university online. I'm writing to inquire about some information as follows；含有宾语从句的句子I wonder if there are any further requirements.形式宾语it后接宾语从句的句子I would appreciate it if you would be kind enough to provide me with the relevant information above.2.使用了过渡词语：To start with，Second，Third等。3.使用了重要短语：as follows列举如下；look forward to期待。