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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错

误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn't move. The young man didn't know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】happened--happen

【2】home前的to去掉；

【3】while--when

【4】but--and

【5】her--his

【6】bad--badly

【7】how--what

【8】send--sent

【9】policeman--policemen

【10】while后加he

【解析】

【1】happened—happen 考查动词的时态。See sth do看到某事发生，故用动词原形。

【2】home前的to去掉； 考查介词 。on one’s way to 去。。的路上。Home是副词，故to要省略；

【3】while—when 考查连词。Be doing when….正在做某事突然。。；

【4】but—and 考查连词。句意：年轻人看到这个女孩并且试着阻止。表示并列关系；

【5】her--his 考查连词。句意：他撞到这个女孩，也从车上摔下来。

【6】bad--badly 考查副词。Badly用来修饰be hurt，表示受伤严重。

【7】how--what 考查特殊疑问词。句意：年轻人不知道做什么。

【8】send--sent 考查动词的时态。整个文章用一般过去时来叙述这件事，故用sent.

【9】policeman--policemen 考查名词。One of 后面加名词复数。

【10】while后加he 考查句子结构。句意：其中一个警察与年轻人谈话，并记下一些事情。While是连词后面加句子，缺少主语。