Question

【题目】短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My time travel trip was certainly an exhausting one. A company, well-known as its expertise, transported us into a future in a time capsule. It swung gentle sideways as we lay relaxing and dreaming. However, as soon as we arrived, we were shocked at the terrible surrounding and hit by a lack of fresh air. Besides, “time lag” kept me got flashbacks from my previous time period for the first few days, that made me nervous. Flying a carriage was not easy, either. Problems arose the moment when we reached a large market. With too many carriages flying by in all directions, my friend and guide, Wang Ping, swept up into the centre of it! What was I supposed to do?

Answer 1

【答案】1. as改成for

2. future前的a改成 the

3. gentle改成gently

4. relaxing改成relaxed

5. surrounding改成surroundings

6. got改成getting

7. that改成which

8. 删除when

9. swept前加was

10. it改成them

【解析】1.句意：一个公司，因为它的专长而闻名。be well-known for因为---而闻名，故把as改成for。

2. 句意：一个公司，因为它的专长而闻名，将把我们变成未来一个时间舱。根据句意可知把future前的a改成 the。

3.此处是副词修饰动词，故把gentle改成gently。

4.句意：当我们躺着，感到放松和充满梦想的时候，它向一侧温柔地摇摆着。故把relaxing改成relaxed。

5.句意：在这可怕的环境里，我们感到震惊。surroundings 环境，周围的事物，故把surrounding改成surroundings。

6.固定结构：keep sb. doing sth.保持某人一直做某事，故把got改成getting。

7.此处是前面整个句子做先行词，后面是which引导的非限制性定语从句，故把that改成which。

8.此处the moment一---就---，相当于as soon as引导时间状语从句，故删除when。

9.句意：我的朋友兼向导王平被扫到他们中心。可知用一般过去时态的被动语态，主语是单数第三人称形式，故在swept前加was。

10. 句意：我的朋友兼向导王平被扫到他们中心。此处用them代替前面的carriages，故把it改成them。