Question

目前我国中学生的健康状况越来越差，这使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑。为解决这一问题，有些人提出将体育纳入高考。请结合实际谈谈你的看法。
注意：①文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；  ②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；③ 词数不少于120。

Answer 1

One possible version:
The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts. To have this problem solved, some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination.
I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task. It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field.
However, good health is an essential foundation of learning. Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning. Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. Moreover, schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise.

解析试题分析：本文是一篇短文写作，摆现象谈看法。要求提示虽然不详细，但内容很明确，考生也比较容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前要认真审题，根据提示写作主要有三部分内容，第一段开门见山摆出现象目前我国中学生的健康状况越来越差，这使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑。为解决这一问题，有些人提出将体育纳入高考；第二段表达自己的看法肯定或否定都可，陈述理由；第三段如若反对表达更好的建议。另外，要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时。人称用第一、三人称。还要注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文章符合写作要求，要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如propose，by no means，far beyond our ability to do，an essential foundation of learning，awareness of the importance of keeping fit并运用了主语从句：The fact that high school students…; some people propose that PE be included…；only的倒装结构：Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning.注意了句子的衔接如：however，therefore，moreover等。这些词句用得恰当到位，为文章增添色彩。
考点：短文写作