Question

假如你是美国的Mike，你的朋友李华打算到国外留学，他写信询问你什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐。请你根据下列要点给对方写一封回信：

1.语言是道硬门槛; 2.适应能力很重要; 3.兴趣爱好被看重; 4.要有社会责任感.

注意：词数100左右，开头和结束语已写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：适应 adapt to

Dear Li Hua,

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Yours,

Mike

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.

As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.

This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.

Yours, Mike

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，写关于什么样的中国学生最受国外高校青睐，要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.和 those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.这两句话都是亮点。还要注意用适当的关联词：besides，what‘s more，last but not least等。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作。

点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。