[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.作文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号().并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

All of we students want to grow up healthily and happily. Here are my tips to you to achieve this goal.

First of all, we should have the positive attitude to life. As we all know, there is not only sunshine but also hard times in our life. So when face with difficulties, we should fight against them bravely. Moreover, working hard is essential that it will contribute to realizing our goal. The reason is because knowledge is power. Only by working hard we get the power to make contribution to our motherland. Final, taking exercise regularly and having balanced diets is also of great importance.

The healthier we are, the happier we will be.

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【解析】

本文属于说明文，介绍保持健康的几条建议。

第一处：考查代词。分析句子可知，us 与students为同位语关系，可知说话者身份为学生，故把our改为us。

第二处：考查介词。分析句子可知，为了谁，表用途，用for，而to表示向，故把to改为for。

第三处：考查不定冠词。attitude为可数名词，第一次提及，用不定冠词，故把the改为a。

第四处：考查非谓语动词。句意:当面对困难的时候，我们应该勇敢地与困难作斗争。分析句子可知，So when face with difficulties,为省略了主语和be动词的时间状语从句，本句为短语be faced with面对，故把face改为faced。

第五处：考查副词。句意：此外，努力工作是必不可少的，因为这有利于实现我们的梦想。分析句子可知，本句为结构so …that如此以至于，故在essential前加so，也可以在that 前加in，in that在于，引导原因状语从句。

第六处：考查表语从句。分析句子可知，knowledge is power作表语，是对the reason的解释说明，从句结构完整，故把because改为that。

第七处：考查情态动词。句意：只有努力工作，我们才有能力为我们的祖国做贡献。分析句子可知，Only by working hard表示条件，只有努力工作，我们才能够，因此需要在we前加can或者will。

第八处：考查名词。句意：只有努力工作，我们才有能力为我们的祖国做贡献。本句为短语make a contribution to或者make contributions to 为…做贡献，故在contribution前加a，或者把contribution改为contributions。

第九处：考查副词。分析句子可知，final修饰整个句子，需用副词，故把Final改为Finally。

第十处：考查主谓一致。句意：最后，定期锻炼以及均衡饮食也是很重要的。分析句子可知，本句主语taking exercise regularly and having balanced diets为复数，故谓语需用复数形式，故把is改为are。

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