Question

【题目】据报道，2014年江苏青奥会将选拔万名以上志愿者为之服务。请你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容：

Dos	Don’ts
1、待人礼貌友好	1、避免不恰当的言行
2、有责任感	2、不忘履行自己的职责
3、介绍中国和江苏历史和传统文化	3、不损害城市形象
如果我成为志愿者，我会全心全意为运动员服务，使其挑战极限成为可能，祝愿此次青奥会成功，彰显其往日的荣光。

注意：1对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当的发挥。

2词数120左右。短文已写好的部分不计入总词数。

Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers

It is reported that more than 10,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2014 Youth Olympic Games in Nanjing，Jiangsu Province. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?

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Answer 1

【答案】Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers

It is reported that more than 10,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2014 Youth Olympic Games in Nanjing Jiangsu Province. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do?

Firstly, volunteers should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world. Meanwhile, improper words and behavior should be avoided. Secondly, they should have a great sense of responsibility. In other words, they should stick to their posts, offer good service, and always be prepared to help those in difficulty/trouble. At no time should they forget to do/perform their duty. Thirdly, it is a good opportunity/chance for us to introduce the traditional culture and history of Jiangsu and China to foreigners. Last but not least, they should never say or do anything that will harm the image of the city.

【解析】试题分析：本文要求以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2014 Youth Olympic Volunteers”为题，讨论江苏青奥会志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。文章应包括Dos和Don’ts。写作时首先要认真阅读提示内容，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文内容符合要求，重点突出，语句衔接紧密，文章布局合理，文中使用高级句子。improper words and behavior should be avoided.使用含情态动词的被动语态；always be prepared to help those in difficulty/trouble.介词短语做后置定语；At no time should they forget to do/perform their duty.否定短语位于句子开头句子用部分倒装；do anything that will harm the image of the city.句中使用that引导的定语从句；另外，Firstly, Meanwhile, Secondly, In other words, Last but not least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。