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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a little girl, my family were very poor. My parents were workers but couldn't afford to buy toys for me. As a result, my dolls looked a lot differently from that bought from toy stores. My dolls were home-made. The first doll I owned was made of a glass Coca-Cola bottle. I was so excited to make a doll by my own. Soon I became a collector of empty Coca-Cola bottles although I saw each bottle as possible baby doll at that time. People who worked in the store sell Coca-Cola could see me pick up empty bottles almost every day. Those home-made toys had brought me a lot of happy.

Answer 1

【答案】①were→was ②but→and ③differently→different④that→those⑤by→on⑥although→because/as/since⑦possible前加a⑧sell→selling⑨去掉had⑩happy→happiness
【解析】本文为记叙文。文章中作者回忆了自己小时候，家里很穷，没钱买玩具，所以她的玩具都是自己制作的。虽然她的玩具看起来没有商店里的好看，但是给她很多的快乐。
（1）were→was；考查复合名词主谓一致。根据语境可知，此处应指“我家（庭）很穷”，谓语动词应使用单数形式。故were改为was。
（2）but→and；考查并列连词。分析句意可知，前后为并列关系，不是转折关系，应使用and。故but改为and。
（3）differently→different；考查形容词。分析句子成分可知，此处作感官系动词look的表语，意为“看起来和玩具店里的那些很不一样”，应使用形容词形式。故differently改为different。
（4）that→those；考查代词。此处是与my dolls对比，前后数上应保持一致，指“从玩具店里买的那些玩具”，应使用复数形式。故that改为those。
（5）by→on；考查介词搭配。固定短语：on one's own“靠自己”。故by改为on。
（6）although→because/as/since；考查连词。句意：不久，我成为一个可口可乐瓶子的收集者，因为那时候我把每个瓶子都看成一个可能的玩具娃娃。分析句意可知，前后是因果关系，不存在让步关系。故although改为because/as/since。
（7）possible前加a；考查冠词。此处泛指“一个可能的玩具娃娃”。故possible前加a。
（8）sell→selling；考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，本句主干为People could see me pick up empty bottles almost every day.，句中sell与主语people为逻辑主谓关系，作定语，应使用-ing形式。故sell改为selling。
（9）去掉had；考查动词时态。根据语境可知，此处描述的是过去的客观事实，应使用一般过去时。故去掉had。
（10）happy→happiness；考查介词搭配。根据a lot of可知，此处应使用名词“快乐”。故happy改为happiness。