Question

1．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．
提示词：放大镜magnifying glass．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
But what makes me puzzled is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup，which is not at all obvious．
高分句型二：
Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided．
句型一 ①what makes me puzzled 该句是一个由what引导的主语从句，what在从句中作主语②which is not at all obvious．该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中充当主语，替代前面整个句子的内容．
句型二 Only in this way can harmony..该句中使用了部分倒装句，only位于句首，修饰介词短语时，从句要使用部分倒装，即主语同谓语部分的助动词进行位置的交换．

解答 In the picture，there is a cup，which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions．The cup is definitely a symbol of great success．（描述图片）But what makes me puzzled is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup，which is not at all obvious．（高分句型一）
   What I see in this picture reminds me of people who use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others．Those people are usually very demanding and picky．（寓意解析）They only see the"scratches"instead of the whole cup．As we all know，everyone has both strengths and weaknesses．Therefore，we should be objective about others'achievements rather than find faults with them on purpose．Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided．（高分句型二）

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