Question

假定你是李华，看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时，不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业，针对这种现象，请你以My opinion on copying others’ homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。

主要原因	个人看法
作业多，偏难	要诚实，勤奋学习
对功课不感兴趣，懒惰	……..
完成任务，使老师高兴	……..

Answer 1

My opinion on copying others’ homework

It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework at school. As students, we have to do plenty of homework at home and at school, but sometimes we have some homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, not only are some of us lazy but we are also not so interested in some subjects as well. They don’t work hard. In order to finish the assignments to please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.

In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the rules of school. What we students should do is to be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. Even though/if we have trouble doing our homework, we can ask our classmates or teachers for help.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求以“My opinion on copying others’ homework”为题，谈谈对抄袭他人作业这种现象的看法。写作要点包括：抄袭作业的主要原因；个人看法这两个方面。可以根据所给要点适当进行拓展，使语句变得通顺。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，也进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了主语从句、定语从句、让步状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：主语从句①It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework at school，②What we students should do；定语从句which is too difficult for us；倒装句not only are some of us lazy but we are also not so interested in some subjects as well；原因状语从句because it breaks the rules of schools；让步状语从句Even though/if we have trouble doing our homework等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用as students, but, on the other hand, in my opinion等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了plenty of, work hard, be interested in, as well, in order to, try to do, by ourselves, instead of, have trouble doing, ask...for help等，使作文的内容变得充实。

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