Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A survey has been carried out among the students in our school, about the sport they do frequent in their spare time.

According to the information above, about 10 percent of the students surveying take doing exercise with their first choice. And other 10 percent choose walking as their way exercise. Table tennis as the national ball game in China had a strong civil foundation, and about 13 percent of the students admit playing them now and then. However, the most popular sport is running, that is both easy and convenient.

I am glad to see that more and more students are taking a part in sports or that’s beneficial for their health.

Answer 1

【答案】frequent改为frequently

surveying改为surveyed ;

with改为as

other改为 another

exercise 前加to

had改为 has

them改为it

that改为 which

去掉a

or改为and

【解析】本文介绍了作者学校调查学生参加体育运动的结果情况。

1. 此处是副词修饰动词，故把frequent改为frequently。

2. students与survey是被动关系，这里表示“被调查的学生”，故要用过去分词做后置定语，故把surveying改为surveyed。

3. 固定搭配：take---as---，把---当做---，故把with改为as。句意：按照上面的信息，大约10%被调查的学生把做运动作为他们的第一选择。

4. 前文提到about 10 percent of the students可知，另外10%选择散步作为锻炼方式，other后面接复数名词，故把other改为 another。

5. the way to do sth.做某事的方式，动词不定式做后置定语，故在exercise 前加to。

6. 句意：乒乓球作为中国的国球有着强大的民间基础。句子用一般现在时态，主语是Table tennis，是单数第三人称形式，故把had改为has。

7. 句意：大约有13%的学生承认偶尔会打乒乓球。此处指乒乓球运动，故把them改为it。

8. 句意：最受欢迎的运动是跑步，这既简单又方便。后半句是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，先行词是running，故把that改为which。

9. 固定词组：take part in参加，故把a去掉。

10. 句意：我很高兴看到越来越多的学生参与到体育运动中来，这对他们的健康是有益的。此处表示递进关系，故把or改为and。