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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处 语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的间用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation. During my stay there, I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener. I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges, either doing research for my papers or read special edition books. The library, which it is named after its donor Harry Widener, stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy. Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors, I was immediate bathed in warm light. I wandered around the library, fascinating to find one treasure after other.

The library is a amazing place. One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library. For me, the library as well as the courses explain Harvard’s place as the home of devoted scholars.

Answer 1

【答案】1.spend改为spent2.knowledges改为knowledge3.read改为reading4.去掉it5.immediate改为immediately

6.fascinating改为fascinated7.other改为another8.a改为an9.only后加if/when10.explain改为explains

【解析】本文为一篇记叙文主要讲述了作者去哈佛夏季学校度假时的的所见所感，讲述作者对于哈佛这学校自己的看法，以及对哈佛各景物的介绍。

1.由于本文通篇主要时态为一般过去时，故将I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener. 中的spend改为spent。

2.由于knowledge知识为不可数名词，故将I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges,中的knowledges改为knowledge。

3.根据前后时态一致的原则故将either doing research for my papers or read special edition books.中的read改成reading.

4.在非限制性顶于此哦那根据中which 指代句子中的主语或宾语在which it is named after its donor Harry Widener, 中which 在本句中作主语若加上it 的话则成分有所多余，故删掉it.

5.在immediate bathed 中immediate 作状语来修饰bath故此处immediate应当为副词的形式故将是改为immediately。

6.在 I wandered around the library, fascinating to find one treasure after other.fascinating用来修饰人故应当将其改成fascinated。

7.After another 为固定搭配意为一个接着一个，故将other改成another

8.Amazing为元音字母开头故前面不定冠词要用an

9.Only if 固定搭配 只有...故在only后面加上if。

10.当as well as 链接两个名词作主语时 要以前面的名词为准进行单双数的变化故将explain改为explains