Question

【题目】假定有一批外宾要在中国过春节，他们很想了解关于我国春节的一些情况，请你根据下列要点写一篇短文，以作介绍。字数100左右。

要点：(1) 春节就是中国的新年，一般在二月份。

(2) 中国的年份是按１２生肖命名的，如狗年、猴年等。今年是羊年。

(3) 春节前人们要大扫除，给孩子买新衣。大年夜家人在一起吃年夜饭。

(4) 年初一走访亲友。孩子们会得到压岁钱。

(5) 人们在春节常常过得很愉快。

1.词数100字左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

参考词汇：羊年Year of the Goat 压岁钱 lucky money

Spring Festival

The Chinese New Year is called Spring Festival，

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Answer 1

【答案】

Spring Festival

The Chinese New Year is called Spring Festival, it usually comes in February．There is a name for each year．It may be called Year of the dog or Year of the monkey．And this year is Year of the goat．

Before the Now Year’s Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a thorough cleaning．On the last day of the old year, there is a big family dinner．All members of the family try to be present at the meal．On the first day of the new year, people go to visit their relatives and friends．As a rule, children are given some money to buy things they like．

People often have a good time during the Festival．

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息来介绍中国国春节的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照时间顺序经行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用过去时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Before the Now Year’s Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a thorough cleaning．是时间状语从句。As a rule, children are given some money to buy things they like．是定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语go to visit，at the meal，try to do，as a rule，have a good time等使文章更有亮点，也使语言更加连贯。