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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以 下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个 单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last week, our school organized an activity aiming at helping the children in poor areas realize their dream for reading. All of us take an active part. Our donations covered the books, pens, school bags and many other school supplies. Some of us even contributed our pocket changes for the children to buy whatever they need. In addition to these, many of us advocated that we did not hesitate to contact the children in rural areas direct to find out their needs. They thought that by this means could we quickly help them out but make our dreams come true.

I think the activity is very meaningful, which will help improve our learning conditions. In turn, they will bring hope for a better future to a community of need.

Answer 1

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【解析】小题1 考查非谓语动词。 以…为目的be aimed at，作定语修饰activity，省略主语和be动词，故aiming改为aimed。

小题2考查动词时态。 通篇是一般过去时，故take改为took。

小题3 考查冠词。 复数名词前没有冠词。故去掉the。

小题4 考查名词。 零花钱，表示金钱是不可数名词，故changes改为change。

小题5 考查情态动词。表示建议的动词后面的宾语从句中谓语用should+动词原形，故did改为should。

小题6 考查副词。 副词修饰动词，这里直接修饰联系，故direct改为directly。

小题7 考查副词。 only+介词短语后面用部分倒装，故that后面加only。

小题8 考查连词。 帮助他们和实现他们的梦想前后是并列关系，故but改为and。

小题9 考查代词。 根据前面的them得知是实现他们的梦想，故our改为their。

小题10 考查介词。处于需要是固定短语in need，故of改为 in。