Question

假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Jim来信告诉你他的家乡刚刚发生一场地震。这场地震不仅造成了很大的损失，也给Jim留下了心理阴影。请根据以下要点，写一封信安慰他：

1.不要独处，要将自己的感受说出来，与别人分享。

2.多和家人、朋友或者同学联系，多与他们沟通

3.如果太过紧张或忧虑，可以求助于医生。

注意：1.词数：100字左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。

3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

I’m sorry to hear that you just experienced an earthquake…

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                                                Yours,

                                                LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jim,

I’m sorry to hear that you just experienced an earthquake. I know you must be frightened and worried now. I have some advice that may help to lessen your fear and anxiety. Firstly, don’t spend any time alone. You should talk about your feelings and share them with others. Secondly, you can talk with your family, friends or classmates, and let them know what you are thinking. Finally, if you feel too nervous or scared, you can turn to a doctor and ask for some treatment.

I hope you can recover from this disaster soon. I believe you can do it!

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文。假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Jim来信告诉你他的家乡刚刚发生一场地震。这场地震不仅造成了很大的损失，也给Jim留下了心理阴影。请根据以下要点，写一封信安慰他：1.不要独处，要将自己的感受说出来，与别人分享。2.多和家人、朋友或者同学联系，多与他们沟通。3.如果太过紧张或忧虑，可以求助于医生。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】I’m sorry to hear that you just experienced an earthquake.这里含有一个宾语从句；I have some advice that may help to lessen your fear and anxiety.这里含有一个定语从句。

考点：书信类书面表达