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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1)．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2)．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
One day，on her way to school，Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station．He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside．From the calling card，she discover the owner's address and his telephone number．She thought the owner must very worried．So she went to the public telephones and called the owner．Then she waited at the bus station．The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan，but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school．

Answer 1

【答案】①the改为a ； ②He改为She； ③soon改为well； ④discover改为discovered ； ⑤must改为be ； ⑥telephones改为telephone ； ⑦but改为and/so ； ⑧is改为was ； ⑨from去掉 ； ⑩polite改为politely。

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了李兰上学路上拾金不昧的故事。
（1）考查冠词。“Li Lan found the small bag” 第一次出现应用a,故把the改为a。
（2）考查代词。从后面内容可知Li Lan 是女的，故把He改为She。
（3）考查副词。as soon as 固定短语“一……就”；as well as固定短语“和，除了......还......”。 由句意可知，应是发现许多钱和名片，故把 soon改为well。
（4）考查动词的时态。“she discover the owner's address and his telephone number ”文章是以过去式叙述的，故把discover改为discovered。
（5）考查情态动词的用法。“the owner must very worried”be worried “担心”，情态动词后用be动词，故加be。
（6）考查固定短语。public telephone固定短语“公共电话”，故把 telephones改为telephone。
（7）考查连词。“The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．”后面句子没有转折关系，是并列关系或者是因果关系，故把but改为and/so。
（8）考查动词的时态。“The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan ”根据后面动词took out可知，用一般过去时，故把is改为was。
（9）考查介词。“he took out from 100yuan，”took out是及物动词短语，故把 from去掉。
（10）考查副词。“Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school ”副词politely修饰 refused，故把 polite改为politely。