Question

【题目】请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让同学们从中有所启发。要点如下：

1．十分钟的课间休息很有必要。

2．要注意适当的休息方式。

3．你是怎样利用这十分钟的。

注意：①开头已经给出，不计入总词数；②词数 100 左右。

A Ten—minute Break

As a Senior Three student,_____________________________... ...

Answer 1

【答案】A Ten—minute Break

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】这是一篇半开放类作文，要求根据所给要点进行写作。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，能够覆盖所有要点。句子与句子之间连贯词的使用是本文的一大亮点，比如as a result, in my opinion, otherwise等词的使用使得文章连贯通畅。另外在What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us. 这两个句子中还使用了从句做主语，动名词做主语，句型变换多样，不单一。