Question

2．你校拟在课外活动时间开设烹饪课．现在，请你根据以下提示，给校刊的英语专栏写一篇短文．
    1．同学们对开设烹饪课看法各异；
    2．你持赞成态度及其理由（两点）；
    3．你对开设烹饪课的建议（一条）．
注意：1．词数120字左右．
     2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
     3．文中不能出现你和学校的真实名字．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给校刊的英语专栏写一篇短文．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点包括：
1．同学们对开设烹饪课看法；
2．你持赞成态度及其理由（两点）；
3．你对开设烹饪课的建议（一条）．
重要短语：plan to do（打算做某事）；in one's opinion（在某人看来）；not only…but also（不仅…而且）；take care of（照顾）；enrich our after-school life（丰富我们的课后生活）；
 in order to （为了…）； look forward to（渴望，期望）．
高分句型：
1．By attending it，we can learn a very useful living skill to help ourselves not only live independently but also take care of our families．
  句中关联词"not only…but also"意为"不仅…而且"．
2．Besides，taking this course is a way to reduce our study pressure and enrich our after-school life．
  taking this course 是动名词短语作主语，谓语动词用单数形式．
3．I think it would be ideal if the teachers tell us how to cook safely in order not to get hurt while practicing cooking．
这是一个句中it引导一个宾语从句，宾语从句中又有if引导的条件状语从句的高级句型．

解答 Recently，our school is planning to offer us a cooking course as one of the after-school activities．Towards this，students have different attitudes．同学们对开设烹饪课看法
In my opinion，the cooking course can be beneficial and enjoyable．（高分句型一）By attending it，we can learn a very useful living skill to help ourselves not only live independently but also take care of our families．（高分句型二）Besides，taking this course is a way to reduce our study pressure and enrich our after-school life．你的态度及理由
To make this course a great success，I'd like to make a suggestion here．（高分句型三）I think it would be ideal if the teachers tell us how to cook safely in order not to get hurt while practicing cooking．
Actually，the idea of providing the cooking course for students is very creative and I'm really looking forward to it!你对开设烹饪课的建议

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和句型，把文章提升一个等次．