Question

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假如你的网友John即将外出旅行，请你根据以下提示，用英语给他写封电子邮件，向他介绍你对旅游的看法并提醒他旅行注意事项。

1. 旅游是一种非常好的活动。当你累了或有空的时候，到外地走走。欣赏美景，呼吸

新鲜空气，交朋友，放松身心，忘记疲劳，有益健康。

2. 旅行前的准备。了解天气，带好衣服、相机、常用药品等。

3. 旅行时注意饮食卫生和安全，防止小偷。

要求：1、行文连贯，不得逐句翻译；

         2、词数：120词左右

Dear John,

    I am glad to hear that you are going to travel. Now I’d like to share my view on traveling with you.

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Yours,

Ren Jin

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear John,

  I am glad to hear that you are going to travel. Now I’d like to share my view on traveling with you.

  In my opinio­n, traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired with your work or study and when you have free time, you can go out to enjoy the beauty of nature .You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. Only by relaxing yourself will you forget your tiredness and build your health.

In order to have a pleasant journey, you need to make full preparations ahead of time. You’d better have clear information about the weather，and bring proper clothes, a camera, some medicine for common injuries or diseases and so on. On your journey, you must pay attention to what you eat. Be careful with everything everywhere in case your money gets stolen.

  Do you agree with me? Wish you a good journey.

                                                     Yours,

Ren Jing

【解析】略