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4．I often dream of being a teacher．I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls．I teach them，play with them，watch them growing up．I am always young when I was staying with them．I know there is not easy to be a teacher．Without enough knowledges，you can never teach good．Besides，you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him．Though I am a student now，but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中陈述了自己的理想--成为一名老师．作者认为要想成为一名老师，不仅要有充分的文化知识，还得把学生当作朋友，照顾好学生．

解答 I often dream of being a teacher．I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls．I teach them，play with them，w∧atch them growing up．I am always young when I was staying with them．I know there is not easy to be a teacher．Without enough knowledges，you can never teach good．Besides，you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of him．Though I am a student now，but I will work very hard to make my dream comes true．
详解：
1．in改为on；考查介词，stand on the platform是固定搭配，意为"站在教室的讲台上面"．
2．give改为giving；考查非谓语动词，此处giving和前面的standing是并列成分，用在介词of之后，故形式要保持一致，用动名词形式．
3．watch前面加and；考查并列成分，多个成分并列时，最后两个并列内容之间加and．
4．was改为am；考查动词的时态，根据上下文时态可知用一般现在时．
5．there改为it；考查固定句式，此处用it作宾语从句中的形式主语，真正的主语为不定式短语to be a teacher．
6．knowledges改为knowledge；考查名词，knowledge是不可数名词，没有单复数变化．
7．good改为well；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰谓语动词teach，good是形容词，其副词形式是well．
8．him改为them；考查人称代词，此处代词指代的是前文的复数名词pupils，故用复数形式．
9．去掉but；考查连词，though引导让步状语从句时不能与but连用，故去掉but．
10．comes改为come；考查省to不定式，此处make为使役动词，后面接不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语．

点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，结合语境和上下文关系，充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配，习惯用法，句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处，加以修正．