How to Keep Healthy | |
Diet | Keep a balanced diet,take vitamins,… |
Sleep | eight hours of sleep,… |
Exercise | do regular exercise,… |
Relaxation | … |
Other Aspects | fresh air,… |
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息讨论"How to Keep Healthy"..写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从Diet,Sleep,Exercise,Relaxation和Other Aspects几个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:make a survey on…就…展开调查;keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食;keep in mind that…牢记…;it is of great use for sb.to do sth.对某人而言做某事非常有用;provide sb.with sth.提供给某人某物;set aside 留出
解答 How to Keep Healthy
Last week,our school made a survey on how to keep healthy.This activity aroused great interest among students and we collected many useful suggestions.(高分句型) Firstly,we are encouraged to keep a balanced diet and take vitamins.Secondly,please keep in mind that it is of great use for students to have eight hours of sleep,for it provides us with enough energy to study.(高分句型)At the same time,we are required to pay much attention to doing regular exercise,which is a golden opportunity for us to strengthen our physical health.(高分句型)In addition,there are many other aspects contributing to our fitness.Don't forget to set aside some time for fresh air and relaxation.
Through this activity,we can gain much information about keeping healthy.
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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