Question

8．某英文网站有一"Family"栏目．请写一篇短文投稿，简要介绍你的爷爷．
要点如下：
（1）疼爱你，但要求严格；
（2）慷慨大方、乐于助人；
（3）善良、随和、幽默
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注意：（1）词数：100词左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
My Grandfather．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给"英文网站Family"栏目投稿，简要介绍爷爷，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：疼爱你，但要求严格；慷慨大方、乐于助人；善良、随和、幽默．
我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为爷爷对待作者的态度．第二部分为爷爷对待他人的态度．第三部分为爷爷的品格．
重点短语与句型：
the apple of one's eye掌上明珠
 be ready to do sth  乐意做某事
 As a matter of fact，事实上，实际上
 full of humour充满幽默感
高分句型一：One day，a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly，he took her to hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings．此句用了who引导的定语从句
高分句型二：Being kind and easy-going，he is loved and respected by all of us此句用了分词作原因状语．

解答 My Grandfather is very kind to me．He loves me very much．I am the apple of his eye．But when it comes to my study he is very strict．Every day he spends more than one hour examining my homework．With his help，I have been doing well in my studies．（爷爷对待作者的态度）
My Grandfather is generous and warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them．One day，a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly，he took her to hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings．（高分句型一）（爷爷对待他人的态度）
Being   kind and easy-going，he is loved and respected by all of us．（高分句型二） Though he is 65 years old，he appears young and fashionable．As a matter of fact，he is a man full of humour．（爷爷的品格）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．