Question

16．假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校学生会准备举行一次"读书月"活动．请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则书面通知，并号召大家积极参与．
（1）活动目的：丰富校园生活，开阔学生视野，提高学生阅读水平；
（2）活动内容：每人至少读三本书，内容不限，并写一篇读后感（impressions of after-reading），于四月三十日前交给学生会；
（3）活动时间：三月六日至四月五日．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear fellow students．
In order to enrich our school life，we are going to hold an event called"Reading Month"．The event is aimed at broadening our horizons and improving our reading ability．（高分句型一）Everyone is encouraged to take an active part．
The details of the arrangement are as follows．The event will last from March 6th to April 5th，during which every participant is required to read at least three books of any kind．（高分句型二）Besides，impressions of after-reading are welcome and should be submitted to Students'Union before the last day of the event．（高分句型三）
This event is of great benefit to students．We call on every one of you to join us．Let's enjoy ourselves in the ocean of books．
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息学生会准备举行一次"读书月"活动．请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则书面通知，并号召大家积极参与，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：（1）活动目的：丰富校园生活，开阔学生视野，提高学生阅读水平；（2）活动内容：每人至少读三本书，内容不限，并写一篇读后感（impressions of after-reading），于四月三十日前交给学生会；（3）活动时间：三月六日至四月五日．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In order to以便，为了；is aimed at 目的是；take an active part积极参加；Besides另外；is of great benefit to 对…有益；call on 呼吁
The event is aimed at broadening our horizons and improving our reading ability．（高分句型一）
The event will last from March 6th to April 5th，during which every participant is required to read at least three books of any kind．（高分句型二）
Besides，impressions of after-reading are welcome and should be submitted to Students'Union before the last day of the event．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear fellow students，
       In order to enrich our school life，we are going to hold an event called"Reading Month"．The event is aimed at broadening our horizons and improving our reading ability．（高分句型一）Everyone is encouraged to take an active part．
       The details of the arrangement are as follows．The event will last from March 6th to April 5th，during which every participant is required to read at least three books of any kind．（高分句型二）Besides，impressions of after-reading are welcome and should be submitted to Students'Union before the last day of the event．（高分句型三）
       This event is of great benefit to students．We call on every one of you to join us．Let's enjoy ourselves in the ocean of books．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．