Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I used to be a physician at a hospital. I often treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger; they just knew it tasted sweetly. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.

Some days before, I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories can produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning, which is difficult for most young children to do so, though grown-up can open these bottles very easily. I’m certain that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor, I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.

Sincerely yours

Answer 1

【答案】1.had 后面加been

2.with—for

3.danger—dangerous

4.sweetly--sweet

5.what ---that/which/去掉what

6.before—ago

7.them—it

8.to do so 去掉so

9.grown-up---grown-ups

10.doing—done

【解析】第一处：考查语态。由句意可知，children与poison是被动关系，需要用被动语态，故要在had 后面加been。

第二处：考查介词。由句意可知，此处是说大人的药，应该用for表示对象，故把with改为for。

第三处：考查形容词。此处表示“危险的”，应该用形容词作表语，故要将danger改为dangerous。

第四处：考查形容词。此处的taste是系动词，后面接形容词，表示“有……的味道”，故要将sweetly改为sweet。

第五处：考查定语从句。此处为定语从句，先行词为the bottle， 指物，关系词在从句中作宾语，关系词用that/which，也可以省略，故要将what改为that/which或去掉what。

第六处：考查副词。ago和before都表示“……以前”，不同的是ago通常与一般过去时连用，而before与完成时连用，故要将before改为ago。

第七处：考查代词。此处指代前面的the bottle作介词on的宾语，故要将them改为it。

第八处：考查不定式。此处为不定式作后置定语修饰most young children，so是多余的，故去掉so。

第九处：考查名词。grown-up是可数名词，表示“成年人”，此处应该用复数表泛指，故要将grown-up改为grown-ups。

第十处：考查语态。see sth done表示“看见某事被做”，故要将doing改为done。