Question

19．假设你是新华中学高三年级学生LiHua．高考临近，你遇到了一些问题，想写信给21世纪英文报的编辑，希望得到帮助．问题如下：
1．作业太多，经常熬夜，感到疲惫；
2．不知如何平衡学与玩，感到焦虑；
3．父母只关心考试分数，很少交流．
注意：1．词数100左右     2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
Dear editor，
                                            
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是关于考试焦虑的问题，对于高三的学生来说，这样的情况是很普遍的，所以本文有很强的可写性，考生有话可说，根据所给要点进行适当的扩充，以保证行文连贯．写作的时候要注意使用高级词汇，和多样式的句型，让文章更有层次，更多样行．写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误．注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯．
   亮点部分 With the college entrance examination approaching，I have some problems to ask you for help．（高分句型）句子有 with的复合结构
  As is often the case，I have to spend at least three to four hours doing my homework every day so that I have to stay up at night，which makes me rather exhausted．（高分句型）as和which引导的非限制性定语从句
What's more，what troubles me most is the fact that my parents only care about marks and seldom communicate with me．（高分句型）带有主语从句

解答 Dear editor，
I'm LiHua，a senior three student in Daqing Tieren high school．With the college entrance examination approaching，I have some problems to ask you for help．（高分句型）
As is often the case，I have to spend at least three to four hours doing my homework every day so that I have to stay up at night，which makes me rather exhausted．（高分句型）Besides，I don't know how to balance study and play．I am very anxious about it．What's more，what troubles me most is the fact that my parents only care about marks and seldom communicate with me．（高分句型）I'm so puzzled right now and don't know what to do next．I hope I could get some advice from you．
Looking forward to your reply．
Thank you，
Yours，
LiHua

点评 注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多．写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑．