Question

17．随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，渐渐和父母产生分歧．假设你是李华，某中学英语杂志社正在开展题为"How to get along well with your parents"的征文活动．请你根据以下要点写一篇征文稿．
1．事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的建议；
2．跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；
3．多花时间跟父母在一起，跟他们一块郊游等．
注意：1．词数：120左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
How to get along well with your parents                                       

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．根据题目要求可知人称可以用第一或第二人称，时态是一般现在时态．内容分成两部分：一 点明主题；二和父母相处的方法，这是文章的主体，包括跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；多花时间跟父母在一起，跟他们一块郊游等．
高分句型：
1．This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no before you make plans．what引导宾语从句．
用这种方式，在你做计划之前，你就能够判断出什么事他们会同意，什么事他们不同意．
2．You'd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them．what引导宾语从句，instead of 表示"而不是"，介词of后用doing．
你最好听他们说的事而不是和他们争吵．

解答 As you are growing，you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions．However，your parents will disagree with you．Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now．Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your parents（点明主题）．
Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute．This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no before you make plans【高分句型一】．Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something．You'd better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them【高分句型二】．Spend time with your family．Communicate with each other at home．Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike，a bike ride，or going to the beach．（和父母相处的方法）

点评 提纲类作文往往会给出内容要点，因为只是提纲，所以要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁