Question

【题目】“中国梦”代表每个中国人的梦想。作为中学生，你对未来有怎样的憧憬？对人生有怎样的期盼？请你围绕“梦想”这一话题，根据提示信息写一篇英语短文。

内容要点提示：

1．我的梦想是什么？

2．我为什么有这样的梦想？

3．我将怎样实现我的梦想？

注意：

1．文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。

2．短文须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。

3．100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

4．提示词汇：achieve one's dream, hold on to, difficulty, give up

China dreams are made up of all Chinese people's dreams. As a middle school student, what's my dream？

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If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better.

Answer 1

【答案】

China dreams are made up of all Chinese people's dreams. As a middle school student, what's my dream?

I dream of becoming a teacher when I grow up, and I hope to work in my old school. Because I want to reward my teachers for teaching me so well. I'll also try my beat to teach my students as my teachers taught me. To achieve my dream, I'll have to study harder from now on. I'll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I meet. I'm sure my dream will come true as long as I hold on to it.

If everyone does so, I strongly believe our China dreams must come true and China will get better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语dream of 梦想；try one’s best to do 竭尽全力做某事；achieve one’s dream实现某人的梦想；To achieve my dream, I'll have to study harder from now on.这个句子to achieve my dream做目的状语；I'll never give up my dream no matter what difficulties I meet这个句子no matter what引导让步状语从句；