Question

【题目】增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was young child, I always wished I could grow up quickly so that I could do everything what I liked I wanted badly to have more space so that I could follow my own heart without follow my parents, instructions. As time going by, I have grown up gradually. But I find things are quite different from what I expect. I do have the freedom to do more things alone. Moreover, I have to take on more responsibilities at the same time I have to take charges of my life and face challenges brave. Now I am determining to work hard at my lessons so that I can be admitted to a famous college and make my dream come truly.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】本文主要描述了作者在成长的过程中，心理状态也发生了变化。

考查冠词。泛指“一个小孩”，且young的首字母发音是辅音，所以young前加不定冠词a。

考查定语从句。that I liked是一个定语从句，修饰先行词everything，关系词在从句中作宾语，指物，用that，所以what改成that。

考查固定用法。介词without后用v+ing，所以follow改成following。

考查固定用法。As time goes by随着时间的流逝，是固定用法，所以going改成goes。

考查时态。表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时，所以expect改成 expected。

考查语义理解。然而，同时我也不得不承担更多的责任。表示“然而”，所以Moreover改成However。

考查固定短语。take charge of负责，是固定短语，所以charges改成charge。

考查副词。修饰动词face，用副词，所以brave改成bravely。

考查固定句型。be determined to do决定做某事，是固定句型，所以determining 改成determined。

考查固定短语。come true实现，是固定短语，所以truly改成 true。