Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。7月份你将去北京参加英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集和语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

1.询问Tom的生活和学习情况；

2.谈谈你的困难并请求Tom帮忙；

3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。

注意：词数100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已经给出。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I'm happy to know you have been in Beijing for a month. In July, I'll attend an English speech contest in Beijing. So, after that, we can have a good time together.

If you have any difficulties in Beijing, don't hesitate to tell me and I'll try my best to help you solve the problems. However, I have some trouble in collecting materials and preparing for the speech contest.I know you are good at speech contest. So I hope you could help me and I will be grateful for that.

After the English contest, I'll visit you, when we can go to many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Imperial Palace and so on. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.

Best wishes for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。7月份你将去北京参加英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集和语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

询问Tom的生活和学习情况；2.谈谈你的困难并请求Tom帮忙；3.告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.写作时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：词数100词左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已经给出。

【亮点说明】I'm happy to know you have been in Beijing for a month. In July,句中使用了宾语从句；If you have any difficulties in Beijing, don't hesitate to tell me and I'll try my best to help you solve the problems.此句运用了条件状语从句；After the English contest, I'll visit you, when we can go to many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Imperial Palace and so on.时间状语从句和such as巧妙结合；I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.展现固定短语；另外So, after that, However, After the English contest,为文章增色添彩。