Question

英语写作拟题：你名叫Zhang Yang，是No.1 Middle School 的一名学生。你经常在马路上看到一些人不遵守交通规则，于是向某报社写信反映此情况，内容如下：（注意：词数120左右）

1. 部分行人过马路时慢慢悠悠或攀爬护栏；

2. 某些骑自行车的人擅闯红灯。

3.一些司机驾车时不系安全带，超速行驶，甚至在开车时抽烟、打电话；

4.你的看法和建议…

参考词（组）1.行人n. pedestrian；2. 护栏n. guardrail 3. 骑车人n. cyclists

4. 系安全带 fasten the seat belt

Dear Editor,

Yours,

Zhang Yang

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I am a student from No. I Middle School. I often find many people break the traffic rules.

For example, some pedestrians cross the streets slowly and some jump over the guardrails in the streets. Some cyclists don't stop when the traffic lights turn red. What's worse, many drivers don't fasten their seat belts while driving. Smoking, speaking on mobile phones and speed driving can be seen everywhere.

In my opinion, these actions are not responsible and dangerous. It is our duty to obey the traffic rules. We must treasure our lives and protect the lives of others. So I suggest that those who break traffic rules should be fined or published. Only in this way will they think twice about breaking traffic rules again.

Yours,

Zhang Yang

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。本文根据写作要求应该注意两方面：第一方面也就是要点1、2和3,因为这三个方面都是一些不遵守交通规则的现象；第二方面是自己的看法和建议。

【亮点说明】本文第一段先总写了many people break the traffic rules.自然地引起下文，值得考生学习借鉴。在第三段中，作者使用较高级词汇以及句型，如It is our duty to do sth.、treasure our lives and protect the lives of others.、I suggest that sb. should do sth.等等。最后一句以only+介词短语结构放置句首构成倒装句，号召所有人遵守交通规则。

考点：考查提纲式作文