Question

你打算毕业后去美国留学，想咨询你的美国朋友Chris， 请你根据以下提示写一封信。
目的：增长见识，体验文化；
困惑：语言障碍，学业压力；
征求建议。
注意：1. 词数不少于50
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
Dear Chris，
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Yours
Joe

Answer 1

Dear Chris,
I’ve finally made my decision to go to American for further study after high school.
I’ve been longing to go to American, mainly for two reasons. One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English. I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure from college course.
I hope you can offer me some practical advice.
Look forward to your reply.
Yours
Joe

解析试题分析：本文是书信类作文，要求写信咨询你的美国朋友Chris关于美国留学的事情，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏，还要拓展内容，要充实，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： make one’s decision to do决定做…，long to渴望， have trouble doing做…有困难，suffer from遭受， Look forward to 盼望，One is that I can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this country. 这句话用了表语从句，还有范文使用了Besides这样的词使文章更加连贯。
考点：考查书信类书面表达