Question

17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Amy，
I glad to discuss your present situation with you．People often miss parents for the first time they left home．However，most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment．You cannot live with our parents forever．You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability．You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you．Maybe you will still miss your parents，and your new friends will bring joy to your new life．Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities．You will get much pleasure．
Faithfully yours
Sharon．

Answer 1

分析 这是Sharon给Amy的一封信，在信中Sharon告诉 Amy人们在第一次离开家时都会想念父母，但是你不能永远跟你的父母住在一起，为了学习或工作有不得不离开，这种分离可以锻炼个人的独立能力，而且新交的朋友会给你的新生活带来快乐．

解答 Dear Amy，
I∧glad to discuss your present situation with you．People often miss∧parents for the first time they left home．However，most people have to leave home for higher educations or employment．You cannot live with our parents forever．You should realize that the separation will help improve your person ability．You need to make new friends and share ideas with whomever has something in common with you．Maybe you will still miss your parents，and your new friends will bring joy to your new life．Also I suggest you will enjoy yourself by taking the active part in different activities．You will get much pleasure．
Faithfully yours
Sharon．
详解：
1．在glad前加am；考查系动词，be glad to 是固定搭配，意为"高兴/乐意做某事"所以此处应加上系动词am．
2．在parents前加their；考查句意，分析句意为"人们在第一次离家的时候经常会想念他们的父母"，所以此处在parents前加their．
3．left改为leave；考查动词的时态，本文陈述一个客观事实，故用一般现在时．
4．educations改为education；考查名词，education作为"教育"讲是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故此处用原形education．
5．our改为your；考查物主代词，分析句意为"你不能永远跟你的父母住在一起"，所以把our改为your．
6．person改为personal；考查形容词，这里用形容词形式作定语，修饰后面的名词ability，意为"个人能力"．
7．whomever改为whoever；考查代词，这里用主格形式whoever作动词has的主语．
8．and改为but；考查连词，分析句意为"你可能会想念你的父母，但是新的朋友会给你带来快乐"，所以用but表示转折．
9．will改为should或去掉will；考查情态动词，suggest接that 宾语从句时，要用虚拟语气，that从句要用should+动词原形，should可以省略．
10．the改为an；考查冠词，这里用不定冠词an表示泛指，take an activite part in 意为"积极参加"．

点评 短文改错首先快速阅读短文，了解短文基本大意，确定文章的基本时态，再运用语法，词汇，习惯性短语等基础知识进一步分析各个句子，找出文中的错误加以修改．