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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意:

  1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只充许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was in high school , I had an awful experience . At that time I was so

brave and outgoing as the others. Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all

kinds of bad things to me . I was scaring to see him.

So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to

dine out . I agreed. We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well.

By the end of that night, Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me . Now we

have become close friends.

In our life, everyone may make mistakes. What counts most are that we have the

courage to correct them.

 

【答案】

 Was∨→not

 as the→去掉the

 name→named

 scaring→scared

 So→But

 invited→invite

 nothing→everything

 By→At

 has→had

 are→is

【解析】

试题分析:本文叙述了作者在上学时,曾经被一个叫Big Tom的欺负,后来两人相约在酒吧,Big Tom向作者道了歉,两人重归于好,最后作者指出,我们每个人都会犯错误,最重要的是要勇气来改正错误。

 根据下文作者很害怕Big Tom,可知作者当时不够勇敢,故改为否定句。

 the others表示特指,除了自己之外的所有人,很显然不符合这里的语意; others表示泛指其他的人。

 整个句子已有动词would do,所以name只能用非谓语动词,a boy与name之间是被动关系,故用named.

 scaring令人惊恐的;scared人感到惊恐的。这里指人感到害怕。

 So表示前因后是果,But表示前后是转折关系。

 invite和to see并列,要形式一致,故用原形。

 nothing没有事;everything一切事情;这里指一切都很顺利。

 At the end of that night指的是他们在酒吧的那天晚上,快到结束时Big Tom向作者道了歉。

 apologized用的是过去式,Big Tom做错事当然是在道歉以前故用过去完成时had done.

 What counts most这是主语从句作主语 谓语动词用单数is.

考点:这是一篇记叙文。

点评:主要考查考生的对于基础知识的掌握程度,考查单词,短语及句型等,考生要想得高分必须靠平时的积累。在做题时要会活学活用。

 

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