Question

请根据下面的提示写一篇题为“My New English Teacher” 的短文，可作适当发挥，词数在100左右。
李老师留给我的第一印象是年轻、漂亮、热情、有活力；
她讲授清楚，有耐心，并且总是鼓励我们，因此同学们都积极参与英语课堂。
她教我们两个多月，已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。
在李老师的帮助下，我们一定能在英语上取得更大的进步。

Answer 1

My New English Teacher
Mrs Li has left a very good first impression on me. She is a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and full of energy. Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher. She explains everything clearly and is very patient with us. She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class.
So far, Mrs Li has been teaching us for only two weeks, but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class! I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us.

试题分析：本文是一篇给出汉语提示较多的记叙文。文章的难度较小，基本是按照要求翻译句子内容。成文时应注意：1.文章内容要点要齐全；（1）李老师留给我的第一印象是年轻、漂亮、热情、有活力；
（2）她讲授清楚，有耐心，并且总是鼓励我们，因此同学们都积极参与英语课堂。（3）她教我们两个多月，已经成为最受我们欢迎的老师。（4） 在李老师的帮助下，我们一定能在英语上取得更大的进步。2.人称：使用第三人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.注意使用一些连词或插入语使文章表达自然、流畅；5.使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次。
【亮点说明】使用了从句：She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class. I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs Li teaching us. 插入语So far。