Question

假设你是李明，暑假参加了为期两周的“美国夏令营”活动。期间你住在Smith夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请写一封电子邮件感谢他们。内容需要包括以下要点：

      1．已安全回到中国的家；

      2．感谢Smith夫妇的帮助。

注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头结尾均已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith，

How time flies!

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Best wishes to you.

                                                      Yours sincerely,

LiMing

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

  Dear Mr. And Mrs. Smith,

  How time flies! My time in the two-week winter camp seemed as if it happened yesterday.

  I have already returned to China safe and sound. When I think of the wonderful two weeks I spent in Australia, I just can’t help thinking of both of you and want to express my gratitude to you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience. I have learned quite a lot, not only of English but also of your culture. And I really enjoyed the fun and laughter we shared with each other. It was your hospitality and great help that made my journey fruitful and worthwhile. I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life. I hope we can keep in touch.

  Best wishes to you.

                                                            Yours sincerely,

     LiMing

【解析】

试题分析：本题是常见的书信类作文。首先，注意书信的格式；其次，作文要包含所有的要点，并根据所给要点进行适当的展开；最后，表示感谢的同时，送上自己美好的祝愿。注意时态和语法方面，不能出现错误。

【亮点说明】范文使用了较多的短语和句型，如safe and sound, think of, can’t help doing, It was so kind of you..., not only, but also, keep in touch等，使作文比较充实。范文还使用了定语从句，如I spent in Australia和we shared with each other；强调句型It was your hospitality and great help that...的使用，使文章增色不少。

考点：书信类作文