Question

高考是全社会关注的大事, 学校和家庭表现尤为突出。家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给予无微不至的"关怀", 结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发表自己的观点（夹叙夹议）。

Answer 1

As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is "studying hard". There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him.

Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they don’t realize what a great pressure they have put on their children. It is the great pressure that often gets their children very anxious.

So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last.

解析:

这篇文章要点表达要完整而准确，清楚展示主题。可以先提出文章的主题，进而列出赞成的观点及其相关的理由，同时在其后可以给出反面的观点，论据要十分充足。文章结构严谨，前后要连贯。