Question

【题目】请阅读下面材料，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Recently a piece of news about a child pouring ink and his parents’ education method has aroused a heated discussion among netizens. A 7-year-old naughty boy poured some ink out of a window on the 7th floor, not only dirtying the clothes on the neighbors’ balconies downstairs, but also staining the windows, walls and floors. Hearing about the situation, the parents made apologies from door to door with their son. Meanwhile, they brought home the neighbors’ stained clothes to wash and compensated for their losses. In addition, the parents paid for professionals to clean the polluted walls, in front of which their son was kept standing in the sun and watching them being cleaned.

The news resonated (共鸣) with netizens in that many families have such children, who often make mistakes. High praise has been given to the couple for the method of educating their son. Instead of beating or scolding him, the couple took their responsibility as parents and punished their son to make him aware of the consequences of improper behavior.

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2. 你如何看待该父母处理此事的方式，并给出理由;

3. 请针对孩子犯错，给出合理的应对建议（不少于两点）；

4. 结合自身实际，谈谈你会如何回报亲情。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不得直接引用原文语句；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇办连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Having poured ink out of the window and dirtied the public area alongside the neighbor's clothes, a naughty boy was taught to take responsibility by his parents, whose education method won widespread recognition online.

I also sing high praises for the couple's parenting style. Specifically, rather than shrink from the terrible consequences of their son’s misbehavior, the couple apologized to the neighbors, compensated for their losses and mended the vandalized areas. It is their graceful manner and sincere attitude that leave a deep impression on the badly-behaved son, who, after a deep reflection, will reform himself and turn over a new leaf.

Should a kid commit mistakes, firstly, parents need fully understand the kid’s motive behind. Secondly, proper rules and disciplines should be introduced within the family so that a misbehaved kid will have to face the music after he gets his way. Thirdly, parents should work closely with teachers and instill within kids a correct moral sense. After all, the ability to distinguish between right and wrong will guide children to the right track and shape them into an upright future citizen.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生阅读材料，按照要求写一篇文章。

第一步: 审题

体裁: 应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构: 总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1.用约30个单词概述信息的主要内容；

2. 你如何看待该父母处理此事的方式，并给出理由;

3. 请针对孩子犯错，给出合理的应对建议（不少于两点）；

4. 结合自身实际，谈谈你会如何回报亲情。

第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)

out of；take responsibility ；rather than ；sing high praises for ；apologize to ；look forward to；

第三步: 连词成句

Having poured ink out of the window and dirtied the public area alongside the neighbor's clothes, a naughty boy was taught to take responsibility by his parents, whose education method won widespread recognition online.

Specifically, rather than shrink from the terrible consequences of their son’s misbehavior, the couple apologized to the neighbors, compensated for their losses and mended the vandalized areas.

It is their graceful manner and sincere attitude that leave a deep impression on the badly-behaved son, who, after a deep reflection, will reform himself and turn over a new leaf.

Should a kid commit mistakes, firstly, parents need fully understand the kid’s motive behind.

Secondly, proper rules and disciplines should be introduced within the family so that a misbehaved kid will have to face the music after he gets his way.

Thirdly, parents should work closely with teachers and instill within kids a correct moral sense.

After all, the ability to distinguish between right and wrong will guide children to the right track and shape them into an upright future citizen.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步: 润色修改