Question

第二节开放作文

  请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

     In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

Answer 1

One possible version：

In the picture between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree。Unlike most trees ，this one bends in the middle，struggling all the way up to get more sunshine。The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions 。faced with difficulties ，they never give up but try their best to find a way out。Life can be hard 。but if we have the courage and determinations ，we will finally get the something we want as the tree in the picture does。

解析:

【思路点拨】本篇属于议论类文章，呈现方式为漫画，图中提供的部分文字信息既帮助学生明确写作主题完成写作任务，同时又具有开放性，使学生有一定的发挥、创造和想象的余地。书面表达主要测试学生语言的生成能力，即运用所学的语法知识和词汇，使用一定的句型和词组，围绕一个话题准确、清楚、连贯地表达自己思想的能力。本题旨在考查学生描述漫画、解读漫画以及发表观点的综合运用语言能力。

【范文点评】文章要点齐全，写作层次清楚，能紧扣要点框架适当地增加细节，解释漫画，提出自己的观点， 并进行论证。在表达句式上，注意了句式结构的多变，有简单句，并列句和复合句，有陈述句还有疑问句，还用到了较为复杂的非限制性定语从句；同时还注重了连接过渡词的使用，从而显示出较强的语言运用能力。