Question

【题目】生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。

简要描述事情的经过	打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等
分析发生冲突的原因	1.遇事不够冷静
	2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法	1. ……
	2. ……

注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,按要求适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2. 词数120 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

参考词汇：碰撞bump into；争执；争吵quarrel；以自我为中心的self-centered；体贴的considerate；冷静的calm；彼此责怪blame each other；谅解forgive；处理冲突handle conflicts；明智地wisely

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life._____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting at each other, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest, they were not calm enough and both made some really cruel remarks. They cared too much about winning and losing. In fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

To avoid such conflicts, we should be friendly to one another, which is important to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also good manners to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and undersand each other.

Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已给出部分。同学们在写这篇作文时，需要注意以下几点。

1 本篇文章是一篇夹叙夹议文，整篇文章可以分为三段。首先，文章第一段应交代事情的起因及经过，同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,碰撞，争执，导致关系紧张。此段注意时态，应用一般过去式。。

2 第二段和第三段分析冲突的原因以及避免冲突的办法，时态上应用一般现在式

3写作时注意要点齐全，可以使用适当的连接词，是上下文行文流畅，衔接自然。

【范文亮点】

1范文采取了垂悬结构To be honest: 动词不定式做目的状语以及非限制性定语从句的用法To avoid such conflicts, we should be friendly to one another, which is important to enjoying a harmonious life.以及是It is also good manners to等句式。

2 文章采用了bump into, forgive and forget, competitive, instead of 等高级词汇及短语。