Question

在高三阶段，学习比较紧张，正确的学习方法尤为重要。下表显示了两位同学不同的学习方法，请简述并发表你的观点，字数在120词左右。文章开头已给出。

学习方法	李华	王海	你的观点
白天	上课专心听讲，尽可能经常向老 师请教疑难问题。	上课打瞌睡，漏掉了 许多要点。
晚上	花较少的时间完成作业，早点休息，上课经常保持旺盛的精力。	花较多时间完成作业，熬夜学习，导致注意力无法集中。

参考词汇：①attentively 专心                 ②energetic 精力旺盛
③concentrate on 集中注意力于      ④effectively有效地
Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both them work but they have different learning methods.                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                              
       

Answer 1

One possible version:
Li Hua and Wand Hai are two students of Senior Three. Both of them work hard but they have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentively, trying to catch everything that the teachers say in class. Besides, she often consults her teachers as often as possible if she has some problems. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, so it is certain that she can go to bed earlier and she always keeps energetic in the day. However, Wang Hai has quite a different way of learning. He likes to sit up late at night doing his homework, so he often feels sleepy in class. As a result, he misses lots of key points and it is usually takes him more time to finish his homework, which makes it difficult for him to concentrate on what he is doing.
In my opinion, Li Hua learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself. So I prefer her learning method.

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