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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During last summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job. I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep.
This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this forgettable experience. Not only is it kind of fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but also I learn to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

【答案】①found后加a②worked→working③realized→realize④On→In⑤came后面的to去掉⑥very→so⑦tiring→tired⑧forgettable→unforgettable⑨or→and⑩which→who

【解析】本文是作者暑假打工的感悟。

（1）found后加a 句意：我找到一份临时工作。故在found后加a。

（2）worked→working 现在分词作后置定语，表主动关系，故把worked改为working。

（3）realized→realize 此处Not until I experienced it did I realized是部分倒装，因为前面有did，故后面要用动词原形，故把realized改为realize。

（4）On→In 固定词组：in the morning“在上午”，故把On改为In。注意大写开头。

（5）came后面的to去掉 home是副词，前面不需要介词，故把to去掉。

（6）very→so 固定搭配：so...that...“如此……以致于……”，故把very改为so。

（7）tiring→tired 句意：我感到累。形容人的感受用-ed形式的形容词。故把tiring改为tired。

（8）forgettable→unforgettable 句意：我很高兴我有这次难忘的经历。故把forgettable改为unforgettable。

（9）or→and 表示“月亮和星星”。故把or改为and。

（10）which→who 根据句意可知，those指人，所以后面的定语从句用who引导，故把which改为who。