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本周是你校的“文化·艺术周”，周三你们有幸邀请到了在W大学任教的外籍老师Hudson教授给高一（8）班的学生上了一节英语课。假如你是校报School Weekly Express的记者Linda sheng，请以An Impressive English Lesson为题按下列提示用英语写一篇100~120词的新闻报道。

1．Hudson 教授上课的情况；

2．学生们的表现与评价 ；

3．对学习英语的启示。

注意：报道的标题、开头和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）。

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week, we

 

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【答案】

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Possible version:

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week we had the honour of inviting Prof. Hudson, a foreign teacher from W Univensity, to give a class to the students of Class Eight, Grade One. His class left the students a deep impression.

Prof. Hudson had a free talk with the students in simple but humorous English. He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well. Meanwhile, he would repeat just in time what students did not understand. Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class. After class, many students interviewed by us sang high praise for Prof. Hudson’s teaching.

From his lesson, students came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English. 

By Linda Sheng, School Weekly Express

                                                         

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。本周是你校的“文化·艺术周”，周三你们有幸邀请到了在W大学任教的外籍老师Hudson教授给高一（8）班的学生上了一节英语课。假如你是校报School Weekly Express的记者Linda sheng，请以An Impressive English Lesson为题按下列提示用英语写一篇100~120词的新闻报道。1．Hudson 教授上课的情况；

2．学生们的表现与评价 ；3．对学习英语的启示。应该用一般过去时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意字数，词数100~120词，不能太多，也不能太少。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。