假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mum，
This afternoon，our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us．I write down a lot of good sides．
Time passes quickly，isn't it？It is three years when I became a high school student．Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far，I really appreciate for your support．I know that without your properly guidance，I would not have done so well．However，what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true．Please continue to lend I a hand．I really need your help．
Kate．

分析本文是写给妈妈的一封信，在信中回顾了自己的成长历程，感谢妈妈的指导，并表达了自己的理想．

解答 Dear Mum，
This afternoon，our teacher asked us∧list what our parents had done for us．I write down a lot of good sides．
Time passes quickly，isn't it？It is three years when I became a high school student．Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far，I really appreciate for your support．I know that without your properly guidance，I would not have done so well．However，what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true．Please continue to lend I a hand．I really need your help
1．list前加to 考查固定结构．ask sb to do sth 是英语的固定结构"要求某人做某事"．
2．write→wrote 考查时态．本文的叙述用的是一般过去时，所以write应该用过去时wrote．
3．isn't→doesn't考查动词．本句的谓语动词是passes，所以反义疑问句要用助动词doesn't．
4．when→since　考查固定句型．it is+时间段+since 是英语的固定句型"自从某事发生到现在有多长时间了"．
5．progresses→progress 考查名词．progress是名词"进步"是不可数名词．　
6．去掉for考查动词．appreciate是及物动词后跟宾语your support，所以去掉for．　
7．properly→proper 考查形容词．此处用形容词修饰名词guidance，proper是形容词"合适的"．　
8．puzzling→puzzled 考查形容词．puzzling"令人迷惑的"修饰物，puzzled是形容词"感到迷惑"修饰人，此处是我迷惑，所以用puzzled．　
9．the→a　考查冠词．我的理想是进入一所高等大学，这里是泛指，所以用不定冠词a．
10．I→me 考查代词．此处填的是宾语，所以用宾格代词me．

点评高考英语改错题是以篇章为单位的短文改错．这不仅要求考生有更高的阅读理解能力，而且迫使考生摆脱孤立片面的思维定势，以一种连贯的思路、整体的眼光去适应这一题型．做这种类型的题目应先从头到尾通读全文，在正确理解或大致正确理解甚至在猜想原文的前提下，再仔细推敲需要改正或添删的内容．找出错误并改正后，还需要再通读全文，从整体上来检查被改正后的短文意思是否通顺，逻辑概念是否严密合理，结构是否正确．

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