Question

【题目】假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。:

Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we finally got him out. Fortunately , she didn’t suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never forget it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.习惯用法：in the countryside在农村，故在countryside前加the。

2.根据Last Saturday可知句子用一般过去时态，故把meet---met。

3.固定句式：was/were doing ---when---，正在做---这时候---，故把while---when。

4.句意：她感到如此害怕甚至放声大哭。故把frightening--- frightened。

5. One of+名词复数，故把classmate---classmates。

6.根据前面的a girl可知把we finally got him out.中的him---her。

7.形容词修饰名词，故把seriously--- serious。

8.句意：看起来她的脚踝有点扭曲。根据句意可知句子用一般过去时态的被动语态，故在slightly前加was。

9.固定搭配：manage to do sth.想法做成某事，故把sending---send。

10.定语从句 an experience we’ll never forget it,中it是多余的，故把it去掉。